Veiled Embers (Kites of the Arc #1) by Jasmine Flowerday

[BLURB]


After five years of living in a cabin in the woods, Savannah is forced out of hiding and back into the Supernatural world she comes from when her mother disappears. She must overcome her untrusting nature and work with strangers to bring her mother back.
As a Morphling, Samuel has grown up hearing of Kites and their intense powers, but he had never met one. No wonder, since almost the entire race was wiped out a few years ago. Ditching school was never as rewarding as the day he met Savannah, a Kite! Following her into the woods and her adventures, he wondered how was he ever going to keep up with these Veiled Embers?

All it takes is one day for their lives to be turned completely upside-down. After using a little too much magic, Savannah accidentally brings Samuel, a mysterious boy, into their lives.

What will he discover about these Veiled Embers?

[MY THOUGHTS]
3 out of 5 stars


The fantasy of this book is really fantastic. I enjoyed reading about the main characters, but overall, this book had many flaws.

One of the things that really bothered me were the repetitive words. I almost had to put this in the DNF pile. I also had an issue with the changes in point of view. There needed to be some kind of spacing or break. Due to the problems and the amount of editing this book requires, I'm giving it 3 stars.